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I loved reading about the clans and the fire symbolism. This entire chapter is fraught with mystery and danger. I love it.

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I need to tell ya-that’s some excellent storytelling…👏👏👏👏

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Thank you so much, Susan. I’m really enjoying how it is evolving. The process never ceases to amaze me. Just when I am not sure where the whole thing is headed I take a nap and suddenly the next piece is clear. How are you feeling by the way? Been thinking about you.

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Well your talent is clear. I need to go back and start from the beginning!

I’m doing well-ok, better- than a week ago! I’m still coughing but that comes with the territory! I’m too mean to die so…. 😂😂😂

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May 7·edited May 7Author

LMAO…plus those of us who value your company will not allow it ;-)

Having struggled with asthma I know how debilitating it can be especially when some bug is added to the mix.

Thank you for kind words. I’ll be eager to hear what you think of what I th8nk of as the “saga.”

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Ohhhh, this was brilliant. Wonder if her mind will be awakened as she sleeps after that encounter. 🤔

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Great question, Kimberly. I'm walking a fine line here. Don't want to tip over into fantasy fiction, because it is NOT that. Stay tuned :-)

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