So, Manuel wasn't with D when he died, Ivan - Tattoo Guy- was. I can see how unnerving that must have been to feel Ivan had an upper hand, but good for her speaking her truth and acknowledging her feelings.
Like Gypsiechick, looking towards the next installment. ☺️
Excellent!
Thank you! So glad to have another writing reading along.
What happens next...?
Writing, writing, writing....
your opener has the hook, Jena . . . an abruption mid scene . . . nice tactic.
Thank you, David :-)
So, Manuel wasn't with D when he died, Ivan - Tattoo Guy- was. I can see how unnerving that must have been to feel Ivan had an upper hand, but good for her speaking her truth and acknowledging her feelings.
Like Gypsiechick, looking towards the next installment. ☺️
So engaging and energetic... still holding my breath. 🌹